Angel of Death

I just bought The Host today, can't wait to read it!!

Thanks so much for finding the mistakes that I probably would have never ever found Esme. It'll take me some time to come back to fix this but I'll get ...

I loved this Kairii, what genre of music would you put this under. I could see soft rock or pop. Well anyways, I love the message that you were sending. ...

Iamjustbored you should be very happy to know that "Prince Charming" to me is played out. In this story I really want to capture the essence of the hardships of ...

Wow, thanks Jesse :D :D :D

Thanks for the help Jesse and Seshat. I really wouldn't have caught on to some of the things that were pointed out. Thanks again, Angel :D :D :D

I liked the clerk/Adeline conversation before you changed it. Now it leaves me wondering "Why did Adeline act so rushed when the guy complimented her name?" Where did she have ...

Wow Fallen this was a very powerful start, it was very sad. I really can't wait to read more.

Yeah, sorry if I do that, its definitely a habit, but you are a great writer...when you read something addictive, its hard not being addicted, eh? Well good luck!! Angel

Please write more, I really am addicted to this story...you are a fantastic writer! Great job, and keep writing Thanks, Angel

This was really good. You captured the emotion of a battered woman very well and the MC was believable as well. I hope Mischa gets a happy ending. Keep writing!!

Finally a second chapter! I love the name Ambrose, its Greek right? Well anyways you've made this so original and I loved it, please keep writing!!

I agree with writing for love, please please please write more!! I really want to know what happens next. You are an amazing emotion builder, you make the MC seem ...

This was really good, you have a great storyline. I'm off to the next chapter.

I think you have a great start here except I have read Twilight and there are a few similarities. Maybe if you add a little bit more to this, everyone ...